Post pitch thoughts... or something

After pitching to the fine folk at Nickelodeon we came out with some useful feedback. The main point was that the style is too young for their audience. To fix this we need to think about altering either the characters or the environment. Jared suggested that we introduce a third character that kids within the target age range could relate to, such as a human bully character that picks on Lil'Tato. Being as stubborn as I am and wanting to hang on to everything in the initial see saw idea I thought this character could just be heard from off screen and then kick a football at Tato's head. At least for that particular episode. As far as the environment goes, we thought about moving away from the Pocoyo look and going for a more realistic, gritty look. Things could be covered in graffiti for example. Also, due to the fact that the see saw is quite a kiddy prop and that I am having a hard time considering parting with it, we though we could have other more 5-10 year olds props in the background such as goal posts and basketball hoops.